United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I love this story
In the smoothly paragraph there are two the's in it in like sentence 8 but I still enjoyed the story.
This one was better at the vocabulary than the last one and I enjoyed them both. Great Job! can't wait for a chapter three!
Great Job!
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YO GREAT STORY BRO
WOW!!!!!