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This is so pure. Amazing. This really makes you realize how grateful you are.
aw. omg. Sorry for this to happen. I know how hard it is. Trust me. Losing a family member hurts a loooot. Hope your mom is doing great! GREAT WRITING!
nice poem! Good job, Oxygen!
It doesn't particularly strike out as hard as I think you were going for. However, I know at least two people it's going to hit hard to. And even if it didn't strike me, I could still feel it's emotion.
I LOVE IT! keep up the great work!
"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.