United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
LOVE IT!!
"Where are you now?" It's not a bad poem. It is a sort of chaotic, that connects to someones fear of losing them. Maybe one day you should try happy poems. I bet they would uplift more people than ever were down.
I LOVE IT! keep up the great work!
It doesn't particularly strike out as hard as I think you were going for. However, I know at least two people it's going to hit hard to. And even if it didn't strike me, I could still feel it's emotion.
nice poem! Good job, Oxygen!
aw. omg. Sorry for this to happen. I know how hard it is. Trust me. Losing a family member hurts a loooot. Hope your mom is doing great! GREAT WRITING!
This is so pure. Amazing. This really makes you realize how grateful you are.
good job. i understand its hard to go through losing someone. but what is essential is that everything is going to be ok. This story rly shows how much u appreciate and care for her and thats rly sweet. I hope she is doing better.
lots of love ♡