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It calmed all right. Good job. The island perhaps is Catalina?
iNtEnSe! it really will be! Keep on writing!
Ah so beautiful. Wonderful. *round of applause* Second chapter coming out on my profile.
I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?
It's a good story. You may want to edit the "dooes" to make it seem less weird. Also are all the people in the story the same in real life, like at our school?
Remember, don't feel bad about yourself. You are not useless! Keep on writing!
P.S.: isn't' it a needle in a haystack?
I can relate so badly. Nice poem.
It's kinda confusing and random but mysterious. I liked it and I think you should try writing more poetry. :D