Oxygen

Wow! Really good poem. I liked it. Keep on writing!

Cliffhanger! Good job!

*sniffle*sniffle*. This is so sad but so good. Keep on writing more poems. Keep up the great work.

I actually really like this poem. I think it is a way of telling someone that you still care about them but you don't really feel like listening to their problems. I think the only thing that ticked me off was that is was a little harsh, but if that was what you were aiming for then it's a good poem. Keep on writing. You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. TIP: write more poems to get better at writing poems, it actually really helps. :)

This story gave me hope. Keep up the good work!!!!!

ok......?

I would add more detail as The Valhallan recommended. Also why is he called the night watcher?

Hehe I remember seeing you write this. Keep on writing more!