Oxygen

Cliffhanger! I'm glad I have drawers under my bed now, because I wouldn't want whatever down there under my bed. It's a good story for your first one. Keep on writing.

Wow! Really good poem. I liked it. Keep on writing!

Cliffhanger! Good job!

HOLY COW! That cliff hanger tho. Good job. You made me want to hide under my bed. Keep on writing

*sniffle*sniffle*. This is so sad but so good. Keep on writing more poems. Keep up the great work.