Oxygen

AHHHHH so good!!! keep up the good work!!!!

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, why is this so good, but creepy.

I actually really like this poem. I think it is a way of telling someone that you still care about them but you don't really feel like listening to their problems. I think the only thing that ticked me off was that is was a little harsh, but if that was what you were aiming for then it's a good poem. Keep on writing. You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. TIP: write more poems to get better at writing poems, it actually really helps. :)

I remember this. I love it. It is sad though. Keep on writing! :D

AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! So good. I love the part where Mark sings the songs to his dad. Can't wait for you to write more!!!! Keep up the great work!

SO good. YES!!!! I really like the metaphor about the straight line and the pencil and the paper. Really well though out. Keep on writting

Whoa! Plot twist. I loved that one. This part was my favorite. Keep on writing this story. I can't wait for you to be done with it! Ah so good! Keep on going! This series/story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G.

Wow. That was a good story. I like it. Keep on writing.