Reviews Given
It's a very meanngful poem which (poetically) makes us realise how bad times have become. Time flies...
Mind-blowing descriptions.
Excellent! I want MORE!!!
Loved it! Amazing! I can't wait to read more of it.
Simply amazing! Brilliant. A poor child's innocence... Abusive Father... Helpless mother... Every single thing is so subtly conveyed with so little text. Children have the amazing ability to speak cute and short.
It was a really amazing story; I loved the theme. I heart how suspense takes over at the last. The end of this chapter leaves the readers wondering what'd be happening next.
Overall, nice effort. But, it had some inconsistencies.
Really helpful!
A lovely piece of satire!