United States • 15 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
You are missing a lot of puncation and grammar. You may want to go through it. Other than that I think it is an amazing story. Can't wait to read more!
It has some grammatical errors. I loved it though! It really was inspirational! Thank you!
I'm too young to know what love is like but I think I have experienced it. In couples. I have never dated anyone. I too have only ever had childish crushes. This is what it was like with one but not as intense. I hope that one day everyone will find the love of their life. I know I perfer hot, British men but who knows?
This is BRILLIANT! I love it!
I was on the verge of tears reading this. I love how it's arranged! Can't wait for more!
Have you considered God?
Dang! I read the Parker and Ashleigh(Sorry if I spelt her name wrong) story where they get together. This is clearly a few years later but- Amazing work!
I found this encouraging. I have never thought of committing suicide, but I think everyone needs to read this. Thank you so much!!!!