This was really well written, and I feel like you’ve expressed the idea of the person’s memory and legacy living on with others in a very different way. The second person aspect was also really cool. I don’t think I’ve seen any other second person stories on here before, but it was really neat and creative of you to have made it that way. Beautiful job! :)
I'm trying to choose my words really carefully, but it's really messed up that that's how some people are like in this world. Absolutely no one has any right to do that to you, so I really hope you know that none of that was your fault. I'd say that you're brave, but right now that seems a little naive, even though you really are. I also can't say that I truly understand because I couldn't imagine how everything you've been through must feel, but your story has touched me in a really deep way. I can say, though, that I know you can overcome what's happened. Know that my thoughts are with you, and if you ever need any help you could always reach out.
I really like the description you put into this. Excited for the next part!
omgggg! That ending really got to me... Amazing work!
I like this idea of zodiac clans. My sister got me really into the signs this year, and then I thought it was really creepy (but cool) how accurate the zodiac personalities were to my family. And the aries was really funny! and it's that kind of crazy that I'd expect from that sign. Love it! <3
I like this idea. And I think the last line leaves a really powerful message.
omg creepyyyy. Is there gonna be another part???
ooo... I like the idea of soulmates.