United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Nice. I loved the flow of your rhyming scheme, and your word choice was awesome... The last line really made me smile. :D
Awww. I feel like that too sometimes. Nice job! I love your use of words! :)
So deep. I love your poem! <3
"A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out." ~ Walter Winchell
Inspiring... so the "Fake Rock" protest has begun. Despite being a huge fake rock fan, I still loved reading this. Nice job! :)
Love it! Beauty truly lies within!!! :)
Sweet! I loved it!!! <3
Nice story idea! I loved the detail put into it. If this is just how you were at the start, I can't wait to see how great of a writer you've become since then!
Wow... Sweet beginning with a dark ending. Loved the creativity!