Despicable_Moi

This is sooo sweeeeeet! I'll try to remember this the next time I'm having a bad day... "This is just a seed, I've gotta get back to the melon". And I definitely agree with not having enough patience to write stories sometimes. I'm suffering from my self-diagnosed, worst strain of writer's block right now! Again, I loved this piece, and I hope to read more of what you write! :D

Ooo... I loved this! I have no idea where she ends up... though I reaaaaaallllllly want to know!!! :D

So deep. I really don't have words to describe it. Keep writing, for that was beautiful. :)

Awww... so sweet! I loved that ending! The Saylarter ship has sailed!!! :D

Such a sweet memory! Keep writing!!! <3 :)

Spooky... I loved reading this! I think that one thing you did right, was all the description. That made a huge deal. One 'wrong' that really isn't that bad is that I wish there was more interaction with the mannequins. Other than that, I think you did an amazing job! :)

Oh no! Poor Jeremy. I loved this story so much though, it was really creative to write in the form of a diary. Are you going to write another part?

So deep. No words can express the loss of a loved one. You're an amazing writer!