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ooooo. I love it! I think the words/lyrics would be a great song. :D
interestinggg
I really like the description you put into this. Excited for the next part!
I did have to pull out the Google Spanish translator.... But I think it's awesome that you incorporated another language in your story -- it really added to the effect. The translations made me laugh a little at how spiteful some of the words were (especially the mom's... I was like "Omg she did not just go there..."). I really like the story so far!!!! :D
Awww... this is soooo sweet! I love that even though it's short, it has a huge and lovely message. I think you just summed up everyone's dream relationship! ;)
Once again... AWESOME! The start off line with the "hunk of stuff" was fireeee!!!🔥🔥🔥 I am sooooo looking forward to the next part!
Oh geez... you realize that this is basically where I left off yesterday, right?!?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO MEH?!?!?!?!?!
dramaaaa
Also, I love that Zak just knocked the guy on the porch out just cuz Zara didn't like em. That's true love <3