Reviews Received
please write more! your writing style is beautiful
Words escape me after reading this... wow... just... yes. please write more.
This is wonderful 😠keep up the good work!
wwowww!! i really liked all of their names!! (SO CREATIVEEE) i really wanna know what happens nextt!! im shaking!!! auhbewusduhi!! please keep writing! :P
Omg, Ya NeED TO kEep WrIiTINGGG i need to know hwat happende dnext
This is amazing! I wonder what happens next, keep up the work! Have a nice day!
i respectfully disagree with the author's note. this is good, it just feels unfinished, but since it's part 2, that's okay. i love how you depicted the change in everli. can't wait to read more :D
Wow, this was perfect. I like how you left off right there when he sees her again. But, I thought he had tried to, y'know, follow in Everli's footsteps. What exactly happened is what I wanna know. Great writing, tho!