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Sepperince

United States • 19 y/o • Female

Reviews Received

ð•ð•ªð•Ÿð•˜ð•“ð•’ð•œð•£ðŸ ðŸš reviewed When: Revenge Part 5

Oh my word. I love Calum already. This short glimpse inside his head is perfect. And I need more!!! Great job :)

25 Mar, 2022 0

lavorish reviewed Everett: Revenge Part 7

It'd be nice if you could make separate paragraphs for each time frame like one for 7am and what he did and so on. I don't know if there's a second part or not but there's no antagonist so the story isn't really building up to anything and if there's no antagonist then you can't build up suspense either in the beginning to hook readers to read. I don't wanna leave a bad stain on this so I'll give you a four out of five since it's pretty long and has potential.

1 Apr, 2022 0

ð•ð•ªð•Ÿð•˜ð•“ð•’ð•œð•£ðŸ ðŸš reviewed Flint: Revenge Part 8

yay! more reasons to love reid! i really liked how you described willow and callum following flint as a gliding presence. that suits them well. also, great imagery with the handholds on the wall.

4 Apr, 2022 0

ð•ð•ªð•Ÿð•˜ð•“ð•’ð•œð•£ðŸ ðŸš reviewed Family Tradition: Revenge Part 13

EEEEEEE
the dynamic between Fia and Callum is wonderful. keep it up :)

25 Apr, 2022 0

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