United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
whoa
Really well written! Would love to see a part 2 of this someday
This story was amazing!!! It really left me speechless and want to tear up
There's a little bit of grammar errors, and a little bit more backstory about the friend would be nice in my opinion, but overall decent story!
I feel like it was kind of rushed, but it was still a very good story :) It left me speechless too
The part when the blanket comes alive really detaches from the story and makes it seem confusing and it doesn't fit in with the theme. If you just left it where she threw it out and was sad, that is a lot better than the jumbled mess of personification you made. Other than that, it's a pretty good story.
The box part was a little confusing. Some more explanation would be nice, but overall a well written story :)