United States • 24 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Yes, a classic case of being careful what you wish for...
A well told tale with a couple of bumpy grammatical errors along the way '(ingenuous' is used in the wrong context: ingenious might have been more accurate; 'inhabitance' in this context is wrong: habitation would have been more appropriate)
Another enjoyable offering overall. Well done :-)
SOOOOO GOOD! Write more!!
A nice, heartfelt poem somewhat spoilt by your failure to CHECK your spelling!
Take the time to use your computer's spell-check facility before submitting future work...
I liked it, I kind of agree on the rant part, but I agree soooooo muuuccchhh about the self distructive motives of humans and how they act against themselves.
Thank you!
Yes yes yes!!! That was great! The detail, the senery!! I could FEEL it! Oh my gosh yes. Thank you. Please continue. I loved it. I just can't. Oh my gosh. Thank you.
Very feeling. I could definitely sense the pain of the narrator. It broke my heart to hear all that - I guess those who have experiance have a hard time forgetting.
Hang in there!!!
Beautiful. I can relate entirely to this. I had to deal with an evil boy and a bratty girl who just happened to be dating at the time. The boy threatened to kill me once and the girl was just full-on two-faced.
That was pure beauty!!!!! I know what it is like to lose someone. Please read my story I wrote. It has a lot more feeling then I think I actually put into it. But it is a true soulmate story.