United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Honestly I don't see where Apemann is coming from. I really enjoy your work and I feel it is almost always complete. Don't take the mean comments to heart, some people just don't have a filter. Keep writing, you're fantastic :)
The plot line of this story was fantastic. However there were many missing pieces and it made certain parts choppy and seemed to be skipped over. Besides that I really enjoyed this story!
Personally I feel like this is more of a horror since it involves murder, but it just depends on how you look at it.
I tend to like short and brisk stories such as this one, they tell you a lot without saying much.
This poem was very honest. The ending could be finished, it depends on how you look at it, either as an open ending leaving the reader to finish and fill in the blanks, or an unfinished ending. Very true poem though.
Personally I believe that every story, or poem is meant to make the audience feel something, whether it be happiness, or sadness. And this story seemed to give off a lot of emotion, it makes the reader feel something, which is what I think the whole point is. Good job
I want to just start off with-I absolutely love, love, love, that poem he had wrote for her. However there are a few little hiccups in the story that cause it to be a tad bit confusing. Overall I liked it though.
I would love it if you continued this series. The entries aren't quite as long as what would be most suitable but they're fine considering they're the very first few. I like how this story is going along and I'd like to see more.