United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Okay, this is a good idea. It's lovely, I like how you wrote from both points of view showing they both wanted to talk again. The only problem was there were a lot of grammatical errors which made the piece a little choppy to read. Overall though it was a cute story. I'd like to see more!
I really enjoyed this poem. I hope to see more of your peices in the future.
I would love it if you continued this series. The entries aren't quite as long as what would be most suitable but they're fine considering they're the very first few. I like how this story is going along and I'd like to see more.
I liked it, it was cute and the rhyme was good
This peice is very honest, and relatable
I liked this poem and how it was put together. Good job, as always.
While definitely interesting I found this story to be a rather good angle on a normal action.
I've been trying to keep up with this series in my small amounts of free time lately, I'd like to see where this could head.