United States • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I love the idea of this. The broken man and the girl who puts him back together. There are quite a few grammatical errors but I'm guessing English isn't your first language so it's understandable, if you wanted to check some stories I've found there is a grammatical error checker in the writing forum (I'm not sure what else you would call it). Overall it was a good story it just needs a little clean up. Great job! Please do continue to contribute to this site.
Very heart felt. I am sorry about the pain you're experiencing. Writing is an extremely good way to express your feelings. Well done.
It's actually a rather good point that you bring up, I hadn't even thought about it before reading this.
Raw and unfiltered emotion.
I understand the feelings of heart break, not that of a break up but somewhere along those lines. It's hard at first but it does get better. Always know just because one person couldn't see how amazing you are that you're not worthless, they were just down right stupid. Stay strong through these rough times.
There's a few errors here and there but they are easily fixable. I really like this idea, please continue. (I love the mention of her eyes and the way he could tell her life is quite pleasant)
This peice is very honest, and relatable