Optimism101

Great story! It's very funny!

um ok so wOw this was hilarious i cant take it
whEEZE

oh my gosh, this is so sweet, i love it. i wish i could write poetry like you!

Ahhhh yes, I do hope you finish this story for it is one of greatness and has lots of potential, now if and when you finish it, I shall find a bard to write a song about it because I feel as if that is only fair for a warrior such as this one.
Great story overall, really love it and can't wait for the next part.

Oof I love this, why do I feel like I’d tell a story like this when I’m old? Anyways great job love, keep it up! <3
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Hey, I used to be like that. Sometimes I still am like that. I'm glad you got through this. It's a very good poem.