Optimism101

I think it turned out nicely. Its very deep, very emotional. And, no offense, very teen. I... I like it.

Op. Sounds like he had a good meal. I liked it. Very... dog. Dog. Anyways, I really like it! Write more if you wanna!

Dawww, sits so cute! Awww. Love it! Love that ending!

Okay, so I think that you should do whatever the heck you want. Like, if you feel the need to write, write. etc.
However in this specific instance you are asking for my opinion.
In which case here it is.
I, personally, would love it if you wrote more. I try to get as much content read and reviewed as I can, and more work just makes it better, gives me more to do, and lets me see more about the people on this site, as well as provide a larger array of stories.
That's my opinion, but in all honesty,
Do whatever you want.

*Imagine like a slow clap but a little faster cus I'm not gonna be rude but not fast enough to provoke excitement, but instead at that perfect "That was beautiful"*
I get it so much its crazy
It's amazing and relatable, which is THE feeling you wanna give in a poem.
Good job

OOOOOOOOO. I like it! Romance is ma jam! I find myself yelling in class for two characters who I want to be in love. I can't wait for a part two! Keep writing! I can't wait to see the next one!

I like it. I always love a far-fetched fantasy. I am mad that it ends on a cliffhanger though, but I will follow your works until my inner-book-hunger is satisfied. i gave it 4/5 because I feel that some of the elements are a bit too wack. No offense, I still love it, and the only part I didn't like was the ability to make a computer just with knowledge that they had. I have no problems with anything else, I feel that the fact that only them survived, and the dreams, are all just mysteries waiting to be solved. My inner theorist is waiting!

Phew, I made it through. I got one more though. What if we aren't the base universe and just a super weird version of another universe? What would the base one look like?