United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Given
You know, I was curious why you weren't active
Then I thought you were working on something
I was right
This is beautiful
Very energetic, and sweet
You did a good job
and yes loveling11 is a spammer, i got like 5 separate messages from them and finally blocked them
haha you have writers block
Okay sorry I just needed to say that.
First off, I liked what you did with the whole writing thing, where everything is like that.
But also like for real that happens all the time with me too XD.
Good job!
Wow you truly are becoming a good author. You still have a path to get there, but its closer than ever before
Nice piece
Ouch
I truly hope this isn't based off of past or present circumstances. However, it is a good piece. Very good. Nice rhyming work. Some of those words could be improved for a better rhyme, but otherwise it is very nice.
Its a good piece. The way the monster is described as being one and none is very interesting. To be honest I had to re-read a bit because I read the last line with a British accent and I was pretty sure that wasn't how it was supposed to go down, but that doesn't throw the quality down in any way.
gg
So much... pain. Suffering, and emotion. I know whoever did this to you would be sorry after reading this. And... I'm sorry you had to go through this. This sounds like hell with no return.