United States • 20 y/o • MaleReviews Given
"Never give up, up up. Never let go go go. Never give up. Never let go. You can reach your end goal."
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It's a nice poem that transverses a sad story. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
OOOoooOOOooOOOOoOOOooooOO! (segment preferably read with as much teen voice cracks as possible) I wonder where he came from! Well, that's obvious. I can't wait to hear more! Oh! Please make more, cliffhangers and un-ended stories suuuuuuck. Anyways, Keep writing! We will keep reading
It's some good fluff. The flashback is in amazing detail, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or the past. ()-() It's a nice story. Not sure who lit the fire though. Mom, daughter, or son. Who knows? Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Wow. That is an awesome poem! Well, awesome in working, not in content, because the content is kinda sad and everything but... you know what, I'll stop. It is very well written, and flows very easily. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
Oof. Sorry, old habit. ANYWAYS, It's a nice story. It makes a character and a world in which unknown details are filled in by the original song. Also, the OP is kinda a jerk. He was getting married to someone and left her. It seems like an endless cycle, with the fiance being the new Op. Otherwise, it's a nicely written story with much emotions. Keep writing! We will keep reading.
Well, whoever that is, they better as hell never leave.
I like it. you have an interesting inn, with an interesting story. I personally hope that we get to see more of the inn, however, you are more likely to talk about the king's story, and that will be interesting too. Can't wait for the next part! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!