Optimism101

I get it. Everyone's heart gets broken, everyone gets hurt, and nothing will get better.

Its... Its beautiful. Not many words describe it, but, its just... wonderful.

Such a nice piece!
It comes together really well in every possibility.
I really like it!
Keep writing!
And don't forget the optmism!

I think it turned out nicely. Its very deep, very emotional. And, no offense, very teen. I... I like it.

Op. Sounds like he had a good meal. I liked it. Very... dog. Dog. Anyways, I really like it! Write more if you wanna!

Dawww, sits so cute! Awww. Love it! Love that ending!

Okay, so I think that you should do whatever the heck you want. Like, if you feel the need to write, write. etc.
However in this specific instance you are asking for my opinion.
In which case here it is.
I, personally, would love it if you wrote more. I try to get as much content read and reviewed as I can, and more work just makes it better, gives me more to do, and lets me see more about the people on this site, as well as provide a larger array of stories.
That's my opinion, but in all honesty,
Do whatever you want.

*Imagine like a slow clap but a little faster cus I'm not gonna be rude but not fast enough to provoke excitement, but instead at that perfect "That was beautiful"*
I get it so much its crazy
It's amazing and relatable, which is THE feeling you wanna give in a poem.
Good job