Optimism101

Wow. Sincerely. Wow. It's amazing. I don't know how to explain it. I don't know how to critique poems very well XS. But still. Nothing changes the fact that you wrote an amazing poem. Keep up the awesome work!

I like the concept. It looks like it could be formulated into something wonderful. However, I feel it could use some punctuation, as well as some spelling edits. In time, I bet it will be awesome!

Nice! Its good work, and really good! I can't wait for it to be finished!

"So lost." I love the song selection. Faded is one of the top hits I have ever heard. It is on my playlist like 5 times XD. That refference made me sooooooooooooooooooooo happy. Otherwise, its an amazing story, and tells a beautiful tale. Sad, but beautiful.

Thanks, happy after Valentines as well. A loving story, and it really is a feel-good. Thanks for the happiness

It's a nice, inspiring poem. Uprising. It's one that would shine out of a rainy day.

I always love a "Flame in the darkness" Poem. A saving hope. The last cause. A nice poem.

Nice. A little misleading, but isn't that a good thing? An enjoyable story, and definitely is relate-able.