Thomas Ray

So sad! So good, but so sad!

I like this one. You did a really good job at writing it, and believe me, you are not the only one who hates their own writing. Keep up the good work!

This is believable. Keep up your writing, I want more.

This is kind of intriguing. Keep going, by all means.

I like this story!

True. Tragically true.

Wow. Something about the way you write hits me so hard, and the emotion you've poured onto the page. . . I feel it.


"The irony with life is that those who wear masks often tell more truths that those with open faces."
-The Rose Society, by Marie Lu

This makes me hurt so much inside. I love it, but wow. I hope people don't see me this way.