United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Given
This is an interesting idea. I like it.
This, this is amazing. I love the rhythm and the words are perfect. I love it.
Hm.... Comparison to other writers is rarely healthy. There is good comparison, but you've got to watch your step. Learning is a long process, but rewarding, almost never a waste. We all just have to improve as much as we individually can, and while we might still feel trapped by ourselves or things around us, it's largely up to us to change that.
Wow, that took a turn. I love it. I can't help but wonder what happens to them next. I do feel like the writing could use a little more showing than telling, but the characters feel individual, and I like all three of them, and while it hints at a larger story, leaving it here still satisfies me.
My thoughts are all over the place right now...
At least they have that.... I love how calm the tone of this is. It's relaxing.
WAY better than I expected going into it. This is amazing.
So many holes in the world
I'll be honest, this is hard to read because of the formatting. A few more paragraphs would be super helpful. The story itself feels very playful, and I look forward to more of it.