United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I like the story it shows what people actually go through and that this stuff is real and its know joke and people should not bully but they dont care and people that go throught this i feel awful. If you ever need to talk girl I'm here for you when ever you just need to rant or whatever I have your back no matter what
I enjoyed it because I can relate to most of it. Keep up the great work.
I think it turned out nicely. Its very deep, very emotional. And, no offense, very teen. I... I like it.
I get it. Everyone's heart gets broken, everyone gets hurt, and nothing will get better.
I've gotta say this. People don't really know this, but I used to be that way. Cutting myself, bring myself into bad situations, or just thinking that there is nothing left for me. That all changed for me though. For me, I don't write to express. I use quotes to express (I don't do it much anymore as I am better emotionally now). These quotes helped me get through as for people didn't really notice how I was feeling or if there was trouble 'cause I was more of a loner type. From using those quotes and remembering them when something was said or done to me and/or others, I just pulled them from my memory file and said it to myself making the situation seem brighter compared to dwelling on it and letting it eat me.
If you or someone you know is hurting themselves mentally and/or physically, please contact them or someone you can trust.
"Everyone is important... Some day moon leave you... On that day stars helps you." -Ashiq Ibru
It was written well, there were things I'd change but they aren't major.
Seriously though, you really nailed it in the author notes. People don't think you would hide something from them, let alone hide something like depression, suicidal thoughts and actions, etc. We ignore people's problems unless it benefits us to know about them or its perceived you are on the fine line of committing suicide or not. Unless you're dying nobody cares is all I've seen, that alone is depressing.
I might have said too much, so recap:
Good job on the writing and you nailed what people really ought to do in the author notes. Keep up the writing, and I hope to see more soon.
I was actually going to kill myself, but then i saw this story. I tried this and the people who were bullying me, are beginning to stop, because the are being called out for it by the other kids. thank you for writing this and giving me and any other kids in this situation a way to end it without physical self-harm. This truly helped. i owe you my life and i can't repay that.
This is amazing!! i still cant believe how strong you are. keep going and stay strong you amazing person!!