SoundOblivion

We all wish for these things and wish these things would exist. Truth is, it is out there, it's a shame that it is hiding though.
Some grammar threw me off for a bit, but I didn't let it bother me from the idea.

Love it!

That was amazing I felt like I was there watching it. LOVE.

Lovely! I have no constructive criticism, for everything seems wonderfully done. Great job!

Excellent

Very sweet I must say. You did a great job, I found emotion that fit the story perfectly. Five star from me for sure. Keep up the good work.

Beautiful. I love the emotion that was in this. I love that you showed the pain of his loss so well. Good job!

This is sad. After reading this I thought about the book and movie "A Walk To Remember" and felt the same emotions as this story did for me. 😢
I liked how you presented the idea of a loss happening making it true to it's experience and the reminiscence of it.
Amazing writing.