United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Yooooo this was so cool :D
I really enjoyed your poem. Well done.
There's a lot of truth in this.
I enjoyed the mystery of waking up and not knowing what’s going on. There’s really only one thing that jumped out at me that you can improve on. When writing, try to discribe the world your creating a little bit more. For example, describe what the castle looked like as Elizabeth/Ashley brought Catherine/Madison inside. I think that’s it. All in all, it was really good! You’re off to a great start.
ahhhhh you've read those too???!!!! I love those books!!!! wonderful writing btw