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-Lynnyan- is from US United States • 17 y/o • Female

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hvdiyya reviewed A Space Play Production

Just wow-

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kiraafinifrock
Kiraa reviewed Until the Sky Comes Crashing Down

I didn't find this cringey or cheesy at all- this is actually well done, especially for your age. I enjoy how you separated the sections, steered away from just repeating the title too many times, but I especially enjoy the first two lines. Very captivating intro and heartfelt without exposing a vein. Distant but still genuine. Thanks for sharing this!

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hvdiyya reviewed Until the Sky Comes Crashing Down

Did you say that ur not the best at poems- Lyn don't make me laugh. this is better than all my poems combined. you dont mind if i steal it- JKK

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Darkness
hvdiyya reviewed Something Interesting

gurl you need to give me advice on how to write like you-
LOVED THE STORY

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Darkness
hvdiyya reviewed How?

OMG LYN THIS IS THE BEST- i have no words to correct it.

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Sepperince19
Sepperince reviewed Doom Befallen (Part 13)

These are amazing! I love how you make it hard to guess the POV it makes it more interesting I hope you keep writing it.

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PuffyPancakes
PuffyPancakes reviewed Goodbye (Part 2)

q u i t e nice ma dear

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_ashidori
𝔞𝔰𝔥𝔦𝔡𝔬𝔯𝔦_ reviewed Do You Miss Me, Too?

I can 100% relate to it. You captured the essence of a toxic relationship perfectly. You think someone is right for you, you really enjoy their company, and they leave like nothing happened. I love this. ✨🌸🌙

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