Lyn

Woah, this is incredible. I’ll admit, I’m scared to talk full-on about my beliefs with my friends. I also know that I label a lot :(
You caught me off guard when you admitted that you had lied about all of the beliefs you had written down. I was ready to accept you and say, “It’s okay for us to have different view points.” But it was all fake! I love the way you tied it all together. Great job!

This is one of the best things you've written! The way you described the snow was perfect, great job! I'm so intrigued by how you wrote the cat's dialogue. How did they lose their name? And why was the spirit a cat, anyway? I would love to see more like this!

Wow, great job explaining this! I've never had an occurrence like this, at least not one I can remember. You have a few run-on sentences, but that's easily fixed. If you'd like some help editing it, I'm here if you need me!

omg, i have tears in my eyes. Oh, its fake. Thank God...
I'm not sure if Lyn is actually me, but I like to think that it is. Great story, it really touched my heart. I hope you and Chloe continue to blossom in each other's company. Keep writing, it was beautiful <3

Creepy... but I like it! I'm not good at poetry either-

I would really like to know where this came from. It’s okay if you don’t wanna talk abt it, tho. Just know that I’m here if you ever want to talk (about anything at all).
The poem was great! It was like a flowing story and I really like that. You are an incredible writer, all you need is a little confidence.

I love how called his goggles “color-correcting glasses,” it just made me laugh. Great job! Your writing always brings a smile to my face, no matter what the story’s about.

Incredible use of dialougue to tell a story. I wonder what happened between them...
Whatever, I like the sense of wonder I'm getting from this so I'm not going to try to figure it out. Good job!