Lyn

Beautiful! Your special one is lucky as hell to have you! Just a few grammatical errors. You have some run-on sentences and a few typos. If you would like me to tell you where they are, I would be happy to. But other than that, your writing is gorgeous! I can't wait to read more!

Beautiful! The last sentence needs a capital letter and gat is actually spelled got. Maybe add an apostrophe S at the end of she, like: She's got no clue. A beautiful poem, keep writing!

I'm so sorry you feel this way about someone. I hope your relationship gets better soon, but I want you to know that it's okay to not say I love you all the time. You don't have to say it to make sure others know it. Show it through your actions. I'm positive your friend knew how much you cared for them, so don't beat yourself up. Brilliant writing, keep going!

You did great! I enjoyed reading it! Just a few grammatical mistakes, but that's alright. As you said, it's your first time. Great job! You abused the caps a little bit, but that's a minor mistake. I loved the positivity! Keep writing, you're going places! <3

Glad I don't have a sister XD
Oh, wait I am the sister-

Oh my goodness! A wonderfully written story! You did amazing and I had tears in my eyes when you wrote that Melody was gone. I loved it so so so so so much!!! Keep writing, it’s gorgeous!

A glorious description of God’s love for all of us! Brilliant writing!

That was amazing! Keep writing, you're incredibly talented!