United States • 23 y/o • MaleReviews Received
This was really neat :) I like how you made the storytelling into like a staircase. One step at a time with each conflicting occurrence, it all came together.
I appreciate the honesty in this. it reminds me of how we block out memories to cope with trauma and the despair that comes through shame, fear, and anger. The desire to not have an identity in an attempt to reclaim this can be so strong.
The creativity in how you gradually went through the process of not existing is really cool here too. You started with the messages through family and told a story within each of the four line stanzas. I really liked that.
Our worth isn't in our productivity and we aren't defined by the toxic messages of our past-- just a friendly reminder.
Hope all is well.
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I liked it. it was very good
You've made this story into like a heat-of-the-moment emotion inside the mind of the man and didn't give much detail as how it was moving so fast and it makes sense as for how the man is acting.
Love your works.
I love this
