AaronTheRocker

So what you're saying is like the song by the Heavy Metal group Dio with the song, "Stand Up and Shout".
I like it

Life is full of knife twisting. It's our job heal the wounds before it's too late.

This is sad. After reading this I thought about the book and movie "A Walk To Remember" and felt the same emotions as this story did for me. 😢
I liked how you presented the idea of a loss happening making it true to it's experience and the reminiscence of it.
Amazing writing.

Strong words in a strong poem. From the beginning to end it is unique.

Ah, young wise one, do you not see what you have done for the people surrounding you? Their lives could be better or for worse because of you and if it is for worse, that is their problem as for they have to learn to accept that not everything is perfect. Even Jesus Christ wasn't perfect. He claims that killing one's self is wrong, yet he sacrificed himself for our sins (not trying to be religious, but I'm taking an aspect to show my point of thinking). For everything, there is a reason, so at that point, it is not worthless.

You are a wise one. Wiser than a Jedi. You could be wiser than Confucius at this point with your writings. Damn you're good at writing a "bad" view and making it good for all readers. You have words that everyone should consider and think about in/for life.

I'm reminded of a quote that fits this, "When we give ourselves up to pain or humility, we give up our essence of humanity."
-Aaron Solberg

I am positive that everyone has had the, "I don't know" moments in their lives. I mean, to add onto it, I'll say, "why do we walk on two feet and not crawl on four?" Who really knows. We just do. It may seem "normal", but is it?
This is fascinating and I totally relate to it.