United States • 22 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Dang. I wish I had the Protector as my personal body guard. A cloak, scythe, and red eyes...this figure has got some style.
For someone who belongs to Hufflepuff, got to give this all stars to a Gryffindor.
Good grammar makes a good story. Bad grammar makes a bad story and this is bad grammar. Not saying it has to be perfect, but some things just bother readers especially when it comes to punctuation, proper nouns, spelling, all that good stuff.
I like the idea, but I believe it was poorly executed.
I'm a dude and just looking at the title scared me into believing that it would be just bashing guys, but now I see it is more about friendship and am happy about that. Having many friends that are chicks, I can actually relate to this. Usually women bond together after a heartache or a heartbreak and say, "you can do better" and, "he doesn't deserve your heart", so I totally see where you come from on this.
Yo, this is cafe poetry reading worthy.
I felt the same way about a chick. Some of the words you wrote I also used towards her, but never though will I see her the same way again after we broke apart and never I think will she love me or I'll love her.
Great poem.
Phenomenal! Love the choice of words. They lead up to each other so nicely.
Dang! Never saw it coming for two things. The truck and "Panic! At The Disco. I may not be a fan of, Panic! At The Disco and was hoping that it might be "Judas Priest" or "Iron Maiden", but that doesn't mean I didn't like the story.
Nice!😊
I'd say it's pretty gnarly. Nice😎