AaronTheRocker

Whoa...that took a quick turn towards the end. The idea is pretty gnarly, something different and something new. All you need now is something old, something borrowed and something blue. HA!😅
Great poem.

Aww, so adorable. Just filled me right up.😊

Strong words in a strong poem. From the beginning to end it is unique.

This is neat. I like that it is short, simple and to the point. It has a nice flow even when it is short. Nice.

I am positive that everyone has had the, "I don't know" moments in their lives. I mean, to add onto it, I'll say, "why do we walk on two feet and not crawl on four?" Who really knows. We just do. It may seem "normal", but is it?
This is fascinating and I totally relate to it.

You are a wise one. Wiser than a Jedi. You could be wiser than Confucius at this point with your writings. Damn you're good at writing a "bad" view and making it good for all readers. You have words that everyone should consider and think about in/for life.

Ah, young wise one, do you not see what you have done for the people surrounding you? Their lives could be better or for worse because of you and if it is for worse, that is their problem as for they have to learn to accept that not everything is perfect. Even Jesus Christ wasn't perfect. He claims that killing one's self is wrong, yet he sacrificed himself for our sins (not trying to be religious, but I'm taking an aspect to show my point of thinking). For everything, there is a reason, so at that point, it is not worthless.

This reminds me of a quote from Pintrest (not sure who said it). "Everybody wants to go to heaven, but no one wants to die." I don't know, thought it fit pretty well with the idea of the measure of life based on good and bad deeds we do.
Great writing.👍