This is so beautiful and sweet! I was shocked by the ending, but the ending made the story so much better! Keep on writing!
I don't think it's too short. Sometimes less is more.
Great story! Love the suspense!
Very well written. I love the plot. Great job!
Okay, first off, AMAZING story. I'm not exaggerating at all. I love the plot twist, the suspense, the drama! It's great! Two, I read your reply to Oxygen's review. Personally, I don't think there's anything wrong with short stories that are in a series. I'm currently writing a series and so far they've been kind of short. But if you don't make the different stories short then there is no suspense. I feel like this is a super long review but this is a super awesome series! Great job and keep on writing!
I usually don't like stories like this. But this was beautifully written. I love how you described the boy's battle with himself. Although it made me cry, it was an amazing story. Great job and keep on writing!
I just was shocked at the brilliance of this story. It's just perfect. Keep on writing! You have a talent!
Yes! The suspense! I love it! I would love this series to continue! Keep up the good work!