United States • 22 y/oReviews Received
I'm confused, why is this bad? Its well written and i actually felt something which is hard for me normally. I didn't catch any major errors and for 14 this is really good. Great Job! Keep writing.
You are a wise one. Wiser than a Jedi. You could be wiser than Confucius at this point with your writings. Damn you're good at writing a "bad" view and making it good for all readers. You have words that everyone should consider and think about in/for life.
I actually enjoyed this very much. It's an intriguing idea that really makes you think about like and death and good and bad. All that stuff. Great work.
Ah, young wise one, do you not see what you have done for the people surrounding you? Their lives could be better or for worse because of you and if it is for worse, that is their problem as for they have to learn to accept that not everything is perfect. Even Jesus Christ wasn't perfect. He claims that killing one's self is wrong, yet he sacrificed himself for our sins (not trying to be religious, but I'm taking an aspect to show my point of thinking). For everything, there is a reason, so at that point, it is not worthless.
This is so beautiful and tragic. Made me cry. Well done!
One of my favorite short stories I've ever read. The emotions are spot on and the way it's written really pulled me in. Excellent work.
