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Andraaknas

Andraaknas is from US United States • 30 y/o • Male

Poetry galore

Reviews Received

ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray reviewed Sleepless

Well written, my fellow writer. While I don't agree with every point you made, I can accept this for what it is, and that's a wonderfully written story. Musing? Story? I'm still not sure, but yeah. Nice job.

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reviewed Internal Screaming

I can understand the situation very well. It is a good writing.
I'd like to give feedback on formatting the writing a bit better but that's it.

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray reviewed An Outlook

So many holes in the world

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Kiwi987654321
Kiwi reviewed Lost

I really liked. Its so true.

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray reviewed Dead Skies

This made me sad. I don't agree with your opinion on religion, but I do agree with your take on school. School is way harder than it should be, way too structured, and astronomically overrated by adults and students alike. It has its place, as well as definite benefits, but as a whole it's failing on a nation-wide scale in regards to educating people.
On a different note, you obviously don't think false hope is better than no hope, so my question is where do you think hope should come from?
Keep writing! Emotion poured off this piece in buckets. But also, no pressure.

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Lollipop_56
scorp reviewed Like a Bullet

Nice...but maybe you can describe how love can be good too? Besides that, I think it's a nice story. Can't wait to read the next one!

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Zip017
Zip017 reviewed The Hill

I really liked this, it was an interesting and moving. I've had a few re-occurring dreams myself.

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why_now
why_now reviewed Sleepless

I love your stories! please write more

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