United States • 18 y/o • MaleReviews Received
Brief though it is, you evoke the scene well.
I enjoyed your story. Well done
i know how it feels, and i'm here for you :<
ily best friend <3
Aw I love this
This is a good introduction, it raises a big question while plunging us into a difficult situation for the narrator.
When it comes to the rift between mother and daughter, you could describe other differences besides dress sense. Do they disagree over religion or politics? Has mother betrayed father? Perhaps these issues will become apparent later on.
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he has been revived! guess that item i gave her turned into a revivel device xD
oop, almost clicked report o.O
first time i looked at the tital i thought it said Santas Daughter xD
and wtf happen to Leo (sry if thats wrong, i kinda forgets names after reading :P)
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
*SLAMS PUTER
MORE DANG IT
Wow!That's fantastic