United States • 20 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Good job however there were a couple of mistakes.
Good job, I like the emotion.
This was amazing!!!! Make a part 2!!!!!
Good Job! Loved it!
Not bad. A bit too rushed though.
I do wish you would CHECK your work before submitting it! There are numerous spelling mistakes in this piece, which are unforgivable as it is unnecessary. You spoil your work through your laziness. Make the effort to use the spell-check facility on your computer!
On the whole you write well and entertain. You are often better than the work you submit. This piece is not your finest hour, neither is it your worst.
yes! But some grammer mistakes like when you said " Like a rainbow landed on me but", change the me to a my. Also a few other mistakes
Great Story! Could you write another chapter of this! I want to read more😄