Reviews Given
Such a great start to a story! Cant wait to see where this goes!
This is such a great lesson and story! I love it and you must make more!!!! There's nothing wrong with this story so don't listen to Apemann!! Your a amazing writer and please keep on writing stories!
Great job!
this is such a good story love the details and the storyline
I love all of the describing details that you used
Yessssssss make more!!!!!!!!!
Don't listen to Apemann
This is such an inspiring sad story! I love it.
This is such a cute poem. Write more you have a great skill!