Blitzø

Your story was kind of hard to follow. But from the parts that I could understand I think it's coming along.
Though if you could add names for the characters and patch up a few errors I think that it could be spot on. Good job! ^^

i dont really know what i mean by this but... I COULD READ THIS. like the little voice in my head was vibing and the words just worked. honestly i really like your writing

that was a really surprising ending! i kind of thought it was suspicious when all of those people kept on showing up at their house o_o the Stultus's were too nice!!!

must. have. more.. please

THATS IT. I LOVE IT. vintage sounds like a very unique characterr. great story :P

wow.. you totally twisted my tingles with this story- loved it <3

oooof... dont stop. OH. loveyyy is the feelingg nowww. fever.. tempatures rising nowww. powerrrr is the force the vowwww... that makes it happen it asks no questions whyyy so get closerrrr to my body now. just love meee til ya don know how~ keep on with the force dont stop, dont stop til you get enough. keep on with the force dont stop, dont stop til u get enough. touch meeee and i feel on fireeeee aint nothing like a love desireeee.. (ooo) im meLting (im meeeltiingg) like a hot candle wax sensationnnnn (ooh sensationn-)

AHEM i loved it. :3

lolll