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Another wonderful piece of writing. So moving. Well done.

I really loved this story. There's a great touch of melody and magic to it. Well done.

Another wonderful story. I loved it. Well done.

Wowow the imagery was fantastic, I love how you described everything! =)

I love this piece of writing as much as your other piece. Well done.

I really liked the first half of the writing. I can imagine the speaker on the street listening to music or tying the shoes.