United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This poem really shows the two side of things. The good and bad part. Great and keep writing!
Uplifting, yet written in very few words. Keep up the great work!
So sweet! Please write more. This is is so interesting and keep up the good work.
Nice. A little misleading, but isn't that a good thing? An enjoyable story, and definitely is relate-able.
I can relate to this. Maybe not directly, but from a different point of view. It's sad to see what I don't, to know the side I will never see. I can't imagine the pain it would bring. On another note, it expresses the sadness, the hurt, the pain, everything. It shows every second of the event, and it hurts. It really does. I feel so bad for a fictional character. It is well worded, I wasn't able to find mistakes easily, and its amazing. I hope you keep writing And as long as you do, I will keep reading.
Aww this is amazing
