United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Received
You are such a goofball, Bryce...... but I did really enjoy the story. I shall give you........ 4 stars and a funny review! LOL
I wish I read this sooner!
There are a few spelling mistakes here, for instance 'fir' should be 'fur'. Fir is a coniferous tree. Having said that, it was a nice twist at the end. There's certainly some truth in the idea that he stood a better chance befriending the cat than chasing it.
Good story! Wouldve liked it to be a bit longer!!
I liked the idea behind this story! A lot of times the story is about a series of tasks that a young man has to do in order to win the lady's hand in marriage, often organized by her father, then an unlikely candidate presents himself and succeeds. So it was intriguing that the young women was directly involved with the challenge and probably initiated it herself which means she honestly wanted to get married, but also wanted to find someone who was willing to work for her hand as well as demonstrate promise of a loving and compassionate relationship.
So, yeah. This was super interesting! Good job!
Loving it :)
Thumbs up!
I love it! The idea that the witch was allergic to gluten and sugar-free was funny! I agree that the ending was a little abrupt, but I understand how since it's a school project it has to be short. The unedited version of Malhuqu Presidium was a very abrupt ending for me too because it was a school project and I was already pushing the limits!