Durandal

I need more!

This is amazing. and sadly relatable. You should never use your words in ways that hurt people. Thanks for writing that.

If I remember correctly, I'm a son of Hephaestus.

FIRE POWER!!!

Legolas will always be the best.

Love it! Great cliff hanger. At the beginning of this chapter, did you mean Gimli instead of Gimil? It's just something I noticed, and I don't remember a Gimil.

Wow, didn't see that coming. Good job!

You don't need to apologize for it being short, I know how you feel.

Somebody has anger issues. Was she too angry to think he might find a way to do both? One of my theories was that he would take her family to someone who could take care of them. I can definitely relate to Analise; I don't seem like someone who can be angered easily, but I can be. This story is doing great, keep up all the good work.