Durandal

Love it! Great cliff hanger. At the beginning of this chapter, did you mean Gimli instead of Gimil? It's just something I noticed, and I don't remember a Gimil.

Nice! It's a good story.

You did good, its fun and I now know why you should never try to eat a hedgehog.

Wow, didn't see that coming. Good job!

That was good, I'm no good at horror stories.

I think this was an amazing story, I really like it and hope you keep writing stories, no matter what other people tell you.