United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Nice! It's a good story.
I love this, and I want to know what happens. Please write 'The Lucky Dog' part 2. Unless there already is one and I just didn't notice.
Stop playing with my emotions Misty! First I thought she was going to be kidnapped(the gray colorless buildings) Then she was going to get married, and then he was going to die. But no! She was about to get married and I was all excited. Then BLAM! He dies, the wedding was a daydream, and my heart was crushed.
Good job!
That was good, I'm no good at horror stories.
Wow. This is getting interesting.
You did good, its fun and I now know why you should never try to eat a hedgehog.
Wow, nice job.