United States • 29 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Great story, hon! There are one or two small spelling and grammar errors, but overall - fantastic! xx
To be honest...WOW! This entire series so far was intense to me. It really does reflect on how most people nowadays jump to conclusions. You better continue this series. I am looking forward to more of your stories. Keep up the outstanding work.
I love the vocabulary in this chapter it makes the story more alluring to read. Can't wait for chapter 3!!
This one was better at the vocabulary than the last one and I enjoyed them both. Great Job! can't wait for a chapter three!
I really loved the idea for this story. I like how instead of the "creatures under our beds" being the monsters a human is. One little flaw I noticed was it was somewhat hard to identify which creature was which (I may just have a hard time keeping up though), but overall I really liked it. I hope to see more!
Amazing! I'm glad you shared!
Fantastic story.....
I loved it, you did a fantastic job tying it all together! I know I'm really late, but I just wanted to show my love for this. You have an amazing writing technique! I had a similar idea to write something like this, so it won't be exactly like yours, but it will have a similar ring to it. I hope that's alright with you because I'm already pretty far into the story. I just wanted you to know that I don't mean to steal your idea and I certainly won't be posting an exact replica of it.